I was recently contacted by a friend with regards to the film Zombies have Fallen. It is a low budget movie, with zombies in it, that has recently been advertised to me on Amazon Prime. And none of that would have had any interest for me were it not for the fact that the writer & director is a graduate of the University I attended.
Given my allegiance to my former institution, and given that Amazon did in fact advertise it to me, I felt I should make the effort and watch the movie.
This is not a movie review. However, so you are aware of what you are getting into if you decide to watch for academic or other reasons, here are some impressions.
The scripting is poor, the acting is wooden, and the editing could have been significantly better. All that being said, the first 45 minutes of the film had a certain tone to it. The movie was trying to be a hide & seek thriller, with one bounty hunter trying to kill a psychic under the protection of another. The story just about works, and there was one element that I thought was really clever, though not executed as well as it could have been.
Then at 45 minutes, Zombies appeared in Gretna (a town down the road from where I live). Allegiances shifted very quickly, almost as quickly as the tone of the film changed to one so far beyond black comedy; I would almost call it a farce. (The Zombie farce was quite entertaining, to give credit where it is due).
So, let’s get to the point.
For me, the major issue with the film was the fact that it didn’t know what it was trying to be. (I am not saying the writer/director didn’t know, only that something happened that caused a radical shift in direction that breaks the narrative flow, making it look like there was no clear idea). Perhaps obviously, this is applicable to written work. Stories exist and, whether or not they belong in a genre, their language sets the tone of their overall impact. Where applicable, language choice helps define genre. And genre guides reader expectations. Language and Genre give a story identity, it gives it a voice. As a writer, you have the freedom to choose whatever genre and/or voice you want. You also have a responsibility to do it properly.
I once read a piece of work by a peer. The piece was ok. I expected it to be a supernatural horror as it was named for a Cannibal Spirit. There were certainly parts of the piece which felt like they were in a horror. Unfortunately, other parts read more like the movie “The Hangover”. I never did find out what genre the author intended, or if he even realised he what he had done. All I know, the piece had a mixed voice and it was hampered by this.
Zombies have fallen started as a thriller. It tried quite hard in this. It became a ludicrous comedy. This was entertaining but wasted any tension built up in the first part. The title bore no relation to the film, sounding very much like a recent Gerard Butler movie (the design work looked a bit like that too). The end result was a movie with no identity, no personality (or more appropriately, multiple personalities). As a movie, it didn’t stand. As 30 minutes of sillyness tacked onto the end, it was ok.
I guess what I am saying is that you need to know what you are trying to communicate, and in what voice, in order to know what language to use. I would suspect a reader would be less forgiving of a book littered with mistakes, dull characters just to get to the last three chapters worth of silly. A book is an investment that a reader makes. Don’t waste the reader’s time.